Week #47(20)

Today, in my art class, the teacher said that we can draw whatever we like. I was thinking about the topic for my picture. Suddenly, I had an idea and then I drew a boy eating a jar of frozen yogurt. But when I looked back, it was so ugly. So I decided to repaint a new one. I used my rubber to erase it. This time, I drew a striped tiger drinking water from a stream. And, believe it or not, my painting got the highest marks in the whole class! I was so excited!

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  1. Your story has a very clever way of including all the prompt words, Linh. It is simple but very effective and it flows very well. I like the idea of drawing different pictures. I like the last two sentences where you talk directly to your reader by saying ‘believe it or not’ and then you use a very short sentence to end.

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